The improvement is amazing! I would recommend adding more shadows to the chest and a bit at the neck, since she has hair and a cloak chain over the skin.

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5 Easy Drawing Steps for Dynamic Figures: A Beginner's Guide

Master dynamic figure drawing by progressing through five fundamental techniques: simple shapes, action lines, exaggerated poses, anatomical details, and expressive character design.

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Infirmary visit

I'm very proud of this piece, trying to nail that feeling of a manga page but I feel like I'm lacking in shadows, particularly black shadows. Is there anyway I could have improved this?

Drawing form imagination

Pure intuition .don't aware of how wide angles perspective are working and what are resources

Breakdown of form.

Slowly improving graphic designer here. I’m still trying to tune my eye without the use of a reference. Can ya help a brother out and highlight which areas I need to improve on, and perhaps sketch in the proper correction if you have the energy to do so?

armour

Hi, I'm not sure if the values are good or if there's a problem with the shadows or rendering.

I just want general anatomy/ lighting feedback!

Lighting

It feels like I don’t put enough darks in it but idk how to really fix it or just overall help w lighting

Floyd

Anatomy, perspective and rendering hair. I want to see if this is an accurate way to show a head tilted back.

Bloodborne oc

Im not really happy with the lighting since i cant really understand how it works

little monstersss

Last night, i took the pot that holds my plant and turned the form into this sort of creature/monster. Now, i would say i did a good job with the organic/dynamic form here, but for the little drawing of the monster battling the long-necked creature, i have a slight hunch that i did something wrong with the angle, i just know it! To me, it feels like it's not anchored in perspective well. Oh, and don't mind the lil martian dude at the corner, he's stinky and we don't want to associate with him. Anyway, if you guys have feedback, please let me know!

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