Hey! Great work on your drawing! 😊 I did a quick paint-over to show you a few areas I think you could improve on! The biggest thing I’d recommend is focusing on understanding your forms in 3D space. Think about how the facial features, like the nose, cheeks, and jaw, connect and overlap rather than just outlining them. I’d also work on your line weight! ✏️ Try using thicker, more confident lines for the outer silhouette and thinner lines for smaller details. This helps make everything easier to read. Lastly, pay attention to your shape design! Using a variety of large, medium, and small shapes, along with a mix of rounded and angular forms, can make your character feel more appealing and expressive. Overall, you’ve got a great foundation! Just focus on making your forms clearer and being more intentional with your lines. Keep it up! 🧡
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Artist's notes:
I tried doing some line weight and painting, and I fixed the perspective. I think it looks better now. I still struggle with shading, but I still haven't reached lessons about it yet, just did some basics.