Hi, first of all I like how you approach your line art, it has nice quality. Here are some suggestions about the design: Towers functioned as last pastion of defense, therfore I moved it from buildings. Scale and spaceing: I have created a sugestion of flat roof in the middel of your building, moved chimney to the side of a roof, depending of your design choices it could also be located on a shorter wall. Moved forge furnace and aded some roofing The tower could have more stone like construction. I have gathered some references to support my vison where it has gaps, I recommend you to do the same. Let me know if that sketch and my ideas helped you in any way. Cheers!

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Abd Ali · 2026-07-14T18:17:51.740Z

i'm looking for help improving this design. any feedback or suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

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