Hey great start here! You’re on the right track with your mannequin. I love how you are breaking down the pose into primitive forms. Proportions are mostly there. I adjusted the ribcage to be smaller in proportion to your head and pelvic box and increased the size of the forward foot. Also, don’t forget that the neck is connected to the ribcage with a tube form. I’ve connected it for you how i like to think of it. One area that i think would be beneficial for you to spend some focused practice on is your joints. I’ve added a couple of examples of how i like to practice the ball and tube forms. Think critically about how the ball “fits” in the tube socket. Sometimes the tubes can almost fully cover the ball. And sometimes the ball can almost fully obscure the tubes. Try to exaggerate these overlaps to be really clear about what forms are sitting in front and which are behind. Keep up the good work!

