HAIIII!!! You are so close!!! Some tips and critiques are one, the chest area naturally has a gap between them so they shouldn't be that close together. The skull shape is slightly wavy and could use a little work. The stomach is just a little too long, I don't understand the arm anatomy at the elbow, it doesn't connect..? And the back arm is overly thin. Also the neck is slightly too long as well, the back is also not bending properly and is too straight. The legs themselves are also too big. Some tips are looking at anatomy references and people watching hehe~ overall its really good, just tiny things that need work. Keep going Abdel!!! <333

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Abdelfatah Bensalih · 2026-10-02T21:19:56.099Z

Currently on the figure road tried to draw this pose but seems off what can i improve on it and some tips if possible

@sil8 hours ago

HAIIII!!! You are so close!!! Some tips and critiques are one, the chest area naturally has a gap between them so they shouldn't be that close together. The skull shape is slightly wavy and could use a little work. The stomach is just a little too long, I don't understand the arm anatomy at the elbow, it doesn't connect..? And the back arm is overly thin. Also the neck is slightly too long as well, the back is also not bending properly and is too straight. The legs themselves are also too big. Some tips are looking at anatomy references and people watching hehe~ overall its really good, just tiny things that need work. Keep going Abdel!!! <333

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