Hi, I like how you work with the lines, it is a good direstion. What I want to you to focus is the perspective, you are capturing the character i 3 point perspective, yet you are not ephesising the right planes, the bottom ones. Other notes: Arm position is not natural, in such stance arm is resting, thry to pose yourself in the mirroe, to check your idea for a pose if you are not sure. Arm piece is too big and not following arm direction. Helmet form will turn differently Eye further from the viewer will be partially hidden behind the nose . Hope that this overpaint will help you move the image forward, keep up the good work! | Artwod Feedback