Hi, since you mentioned it was your first attempt at drawing a woman I’ve made some anatomy suggestions. With the size of her body (quite slim) it’s unlikely her chest would be so large, I’ve drawn over a suggestion which is more in line with her anatomy. I also suggest thinking about the fabric of her shirt, I the lines at the centre of her chest imply that it puffs out and is quite tight to her chest, but the collar is stiff and stands upright by itself. Try loosening the collar if you want the fabric to wrap more easily, or not defining the inside shapes of the chest if you want the fabric to be stiffer. Try to define the hair shape in the background even with a few loose hairs, it will help give the impression that it’s hair instead of a background shape. Hope that was helpful :) | Artwod Feedback