Hey, such a really cool design! The combination of the bright suit, the green hair, and those chunky mechanical arms is an awesome concept. I also have a ton of respect for you doing this traditionally on paper, it is so tough to build forms and commit to colors when you don't have an 'undo' button! Just as a heads-up, I don't really have a background in comic-style inking, so I can't offer much technical advice on your line work or traditional comic techniques. However, looking at it from a general character concept perspective, I did a quick digital paintover to share a few structural ideas you can apply to future sketches: Dynamic Posture: In the original, she is standing very straight. I tilted her head, tucked her chin slightly, and angled her shoulders to give her a more relaxed, dynamic stance. Breaking up that stiff vertical alignment makes the pose feel much more natural. Facial Perspective: I adjusted the angle of the facial features a bit to help them wrap around the 3D form of the head more convincingly for that 3/4 view. Adding 'Pop': Since you're working with a great sci-fi design, I threw in some glowing energy effects and a bit of rim lighting. While definitely harder to pull off on paper with traditional markers, thinking about dynamic, colored light sources can really help separate the character from the background and make those mechanical parts look super cool. You did a great job with a really unforgiving medium. Keep up the awesome work! | Artwod Feedback