hello again! This time i wanted to ask for help regarding the shilouette and the construction of the figure. I think its alright but i often miss some aspects regarding that topic so i thought it could be improved. I also wanted to ask for help with the detailing of the drawing. I tried focusing the details on the hips and the upper part but i dont know if its alright this way or if it could use some more details somewhere. Maybe the feedback asked this time is a little bit abstract, sorry. As allways, if there is something that could be improved that i didnt notice, feel free to share it. Thanks!
i tried to highlight the book shape, because i think its too unique to not highlight it in the pose also the design is amazing :)
Thanks! The spear Shape mirroring the armar is a really good idea,
Glad I could help, if you need some more feedback I could offer you to chat some more on discord :)
I really like that the tail end of the spear ribbon flows directly into the cape flow
