@poltercat

Paintover

Hello! Your art is very cute! I think the main thing for me is that her body underneath feels like it's curving a lot to the left in an unnatural way, like she has scoliosis or something. The top half of her torso feels sort of detached for this reason. I felt like it would help to draw in her collar bones and remember where the actual center of her chest is, to keep it all together. The head being too big can also make the rest of the figure seem disproportionate, so I tried making it a bit smaller. I think it makes a big difference! I'm not really an anatomy expert, but I hope this helps. ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ

@sauriosq

Paintover

Me personally I don’t see much wrong with it, just a few little things like maybe the length of the arm, I feel like it should reach a little closer to the knee, the head might be a little big, but not too much though, just a small adjustment, lastly (might be a personal thing idk), i feel like the shadow on one of the armpits “folds?” maybe shouldn’t be there, i feel like there can’t be such a noticeable shadow in the distance between arm and the armpit. But overall really solid, just a few little nitpicks here and there, keep it up! (Also bear in mind that I’m also in the learning process myself and that my feedback might not be the most useful, just see if the fixes I suggested work for you personally)