Very fun and moody piece. I dig it! For improvement I would go towards two main areas, your perspective and the details of the world (specifically the floor and walls. Perspective, we have some conflicting details in the perspective that pop the viewer out of believability. Namely the right-most wall doesnt line up exactly and makes our brains stop as a viewer and think, which takes us out of living in the painting. Even just removing it and double checking the perspective might keep us there. For details, we essentially are missing anything but the tagging. So lets take that extra step, where are we, what kind of ground are we on, what kind of walls are those? And then we can find real world reference to pull details from. Those details are what adds to us as the viewer "believing" the illusion of the piece. I hope that helps a bit for some direction to go on your next cool artwork! | Artwod Feedback