Hi, the inking and therfore comic feel is on point, you did a good job! Now, going to your feeling of being lost, it can be tricky to manage bigger scenes, in your case I would say you need to narrow the focal point, move some of the elements and strenghten the emphasis on the character. Thing is that the shot you presented is designed like a overall image for camera movment, there is too many things happening, to many foal points, and the most important character is lost. Tell a story about him, rather than place multible elements on diffrent planes. If you want to show more, do separate shots, with different camera angles. Hope that will give you some ideas, keep up the good work! | Artwod Feedback