This is an intersting concept with a lot of symbolism. I like it. I think what is missing is few shadows in the places where light doesn't fall (e.g. building walls facing away from light, inside the boat, doorways etc.). When shading always ask yourself: does anything obstruct this place from the light reaching it? I also think the drawing could be enhanced more by adding water droplets (since the figure is moving and creating splashes) as well as making her(?) clothes wet/adding droplets to the arms. When creating an illustration imagine yourself in such a setting and consider details. I also added few highlights on the buildings to enhance light/details as well as reflection on the street simulating water (but it is optional and something to play with). | Artwod Feedback