@fosco

Paintover

Good job! I'd suggest reducing the size of the character so you can draw both hands. It’s not a good idea to cut off limbs in an illustration. Also, I suggest you start adding more variation to your line weight, since right now almost everything is the same thickness. Draw thicker lines in key areas, on overlapping objects, in areas of shadow or ambient occlusion, and along outlines; draw thinner lines in non-essential areas or for internal lines. Don’t forget to draw T-lines to suggest volume. On the hood, for example, I simply extended the line at both ends, and now it suggests volume. Hope this helps!