I am not an expert on drawing but I can share what I can recognize. First of all, the overall impression is very nice and believable. I would suggest comparing the head to facial proportions to check yourself when you draw. They are easily available online. The eyes are a tad large, unless it's by design. I'd make an effort to shade around them to emphasize the eye sockets, especially the eye on the left so they eyes sink more into the skull. Add the nose flap and nostril. The ears are a bit high. They are typically from brow level to the base of the nose. You could define the lips a bit more and shade under the lower lip to bring the lip more forward. The lips protrude outwards from the face. The neck and shoulders are the most uncertain. There is a long beautiful muscle that goes from behind the ear to the center of the chest creating a nice dimple there it is missing. The shoulders should be wider and the one on the right drops too steeply. The shirt and sweater are nice. I like the collar curves. Draw them over the fixed torso and they'll be just fine. | Artwod Feedback