Hi! I like your rendering. * I wanted to start off by recommending to expand your drawing first. This gives more space to the background, as well as for your character. Then, I’d like to make the body move in the same way the tree is facing, it eases in the movement nicely. For the background I added more leaves and pink stuff and fixed a few placements that seemed to make no sense. Hope this helps ^^

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Ferret Mle · 2026-11-02T21:19:08.227Z

Still working on it, but I need some help with the composition or background, 'cause the character just doesn't stand out against it. Everything looks kinda smushed together and doesn't feel coherent at all (and i'm really bad at drawing backgrounds)

@junkexplorerYesterday

Hi! I like your rendering. * I wanted to start off by recommending to expand your drawing first. This gives more space to the background, as well as for your character. Then, I’d like to make the body move in the same way the tree is facing, it eases in the movement nicely. For the background I added more leaves and pink stuff and fixed a few placements that seemed to make no sense. Hope this helps ^^

@lemonlyYesterday

How can one draw leaves so good? I'm amazed.. Thanks so much for helping, I was really stuck on itt! You're my lifesaver, as usual ｄ(≧∀≦)ｂ

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