this is a super good start! changes i made: -location of the mouth and nose since he seems to be looking down viewer (both would be higher as to show more chin) -neck is thicker i would also remove the pink under the eyes as that isnt very visible when it comes to eyes how to render: to make hair smoother i use a lasso tool, select the hair, and then color it with airbrush lasso tool will be ur best friend for more darker shaded areas, you can always use a dark plum color or blues and then lower the opacity | Artwod Feedback