idk if the empty space needs more stuff in it, maybe crop closer on her face so the expression is the first thing you read and the scene just holds it
Nami at Arlong Park drawing... struggling with the scene
Artist's notes:
Did a quick drawing of Nami during the Arlong Park scene and the emotion isnt really coming through. The composition feels kinda empty and her expression doesn't match the anime moment at all. Any feedback on the pose or framing? trying to learn storytelling through drawings and share my art progress with these workouts