try to work more with the light and shadow of the drawing
idk if more shadow is the first fix, maybe pick one clear light side on the face and keep the rest flatter so the makeup and hair shapes stay loud
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Gyaru Design
Artist's notes:
I've been making a mage Gyaru desig. And while I some what like it, I feel like its missing something to make it pop, preferably around the face. But I'm not sure if its design wise, or rendering wise.