try to work more with the light and shadow of the drawing

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Jamming Slime · 2026-09-06T13:55:24.408Z

I've been making a mage Gyaru desig. And while I some what like it, I feel like its missing something to make it pop, preferably around the face. But I'm not sure if its design wise, or rendering wise.

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Beneath the Ruins

Hi, I'm Harish, I’m adding this for the art review. Color is the main issue I’m focusing on. Please review it and give me your feedback on the overall composition.

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Estoy luchando con perspective, form&depth, composition, values, light/color, anatomy, design, line quality, other

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I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, anatomy, line quality

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I'm struggling with perspective, composition, values, light/color, anatomy, design, line quality

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I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, anatomy, design

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I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, composition, values, light/color, anatomy, design, line quality

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Estoy luchando con perspective, form&depth, composition, values, anatomy

skin tone

I can't seem to get the skin tone right. I'd like to play around more with the shadows and highlights by mixing in a little more color—not just black and white—but I have no idea how to do that.

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I'm struggling with perspective, form&depth, composition, light/color, anatomy

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