With anime, everything kinda boils down to the shadow and light shapes. You see in genga that the shadows are clearly mapped out. I think you're using too much air brush and not separating your values/not separating your lights and shadows clearly enough. The soft edge should be used sparingly. More hard edges would help. I think your use of white is a little unrestrained. I can't tell if things are supposed to be white colored or if things are blown out. The hair for example. You have some nice rim light shapes on the face, you just need to add those shapes to the shadows as well. | Artwod Feedback