Hi there! I agree with the feedback you've already received. :) Try improving your character's pose by tilting the shoulders and the hips. Doing so will give the pose more gesture and personality, instead of keeping the body in a straight, rigid line. On top of that, the staff shouldn't pass behind the body if it's being held by the arm that's positioned in front of the torso. Also, keep the position of the feet on the ground in mind. If your character is walking, it's important to suggest that movement by avoiding placing both feet at the same height. In other words, always keep perspective in mind, even in a simple one. :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback