Hey there! You’ve got a really cool, gritty anime style developing, and you did a solid job plotting out the major muscle groups. The sharp approach gives it a lot of edge! To help push the form and gesture a bit further, I did a quick paint-over focusing on a few key ideas: Dynamic Gesture: I added a slight curve to the torso and raised his arm to hold the towel. Breaking up that straight up-and-down posture makes the pose feel much more natural and active. Grouping Shadows: It's tempting to shade every single muscle crevice, but that can flatten the image. I grouped the shadows into larger, unified shapes to help the body read as a solid 3D form turning away from the light. Softer Transitions: I shifted the shadows to a cooler purple/gray and smoothed out how the muscles wrap around the ribcage. This gives the skin a more natural feel and adds atmosphere without losing your structural logic. You have a super strong base here with a ton of personality. Keep up the awesome work, and I hope the visual breakdown gives you some fun ideas to play with in your next piece! | Artwod Feedback