Firstly I love the details and the line quality. You’ve got a lot of talent there. Unfortunately the pose is lacking structure or form. The ear looks like it’s attached a little too far forward. The main issue however is where her neck and shoulder are placed don’t make a lot of sense. If you want her left shoulder to sit forward as you drew it, then her head and neck would be a lot further forward. Otherwise she would need a pretty unnatural twist to her body. I think if you want to keep her head where it is you would need to change the angle of her shoulders | Artwod Feedback