got the wrong values

i tried a three value study but i thing i got the values wrong am not sure

Fish Gatcha

This one is rendered with guache

balls

i want my rendering to be more brighter! i also want to render clothes and clothes folds better.

Character of a Friend

Something about the head construction bothers me... any tips for how to make the proportions more appealing? Any other advice for coloring/shading that would make the afce more interesting would be appreciated too

Smaugust day 6 Hammerhead

Trying to work on Shape language. Any constructive Crits and comments welcomed.

Hammer Construction Exercise!

This is my answer to the hammer construction workout on Artwod's Intro to Drawing course. 💖 I practiced: - Construction with simple manipulated shapes. - Freehand perspective (no horizon line, no guidelines) - Inking and simple hatching with contour lines. As you can see from the orthographic drawing, my hammer turned out a little stumpy. That's because uuuuh it's for hobbits. 🙂‍↕️ Yeh. For real tho how do I make it not-stumpy next time. 😭 Everything looks good on the diagram and somewhere in the process of translating to actual forms in space I lose control of the proportions completely. 💔

Portraits SktchBk Pg 154

I would like feedback on my construction, form, use of shapes for making a face, and perspective. (Nothing on this page used a reference I just tried to make them believable). Not really aiming for a particular style, but I’m in college studying to become a comic artist. So maybe manga, comic, or semi-realistic would be the aim. I’ve been using the ArtWod YouTube videos about drawing the portrait. This week I’m currently working on eyes and noses. Page breakdown: At the top of the page I use a square for reference, the bottom portraits used on an oval. On the left hand side of the page I had different graphic eye shapes and tried to make a more detailed view of what these could look like in a 3/4 angle. The bottom of the page is making the same shape look masculine or feminine. The right hand side of the page are some noses.

6 - My oc

Cause why not haha

Favorite anime character

I think it's pretty good, but I still feel I can't push it to be as great as League of Legends splash art. I would appreciate any feedback to help me improve.