This one is a bit of a toughie for sure! Im not 100% certain I have the answer but Im wondering if we are actually seeing a little too much back. Trying to follow the pose, the twist of the torso might be a bit too much too fast. Dropping the arm on the other side helps believe the rise of the closer one. Bringing the head up a bit does make it feel a little more natural to me as well If you can take a self reference or a friend posing like this would be the absolute best answer though! | Artwod Feedback