@kanna

Pinte

You got to follow your construction more, especially when it comes to the rule of thirds, make sure the hairline to brow line, to nose are equal in length as for the jaw you can add a diagonal rather than straight line that connects into the centreline of the side plane. for eyes focus on drawing the shape of the eyes themselves rather than the shape and proportions of the skull underneath, looking at reference always helps. for the air placement it goes out from the centreline of the side plane as well. For the nose focus on building up the structure properly and think about how the nose bridge connects into the eyebrows, but overall good work, you're getting the hang of it!

@pvppoh

Pinte

Hi there! good job already!. eyes looking sideways are tricky as is. remember the spherical volume of the eye and how the iris looks and how the eye deforms due to it in different angles. Your construction lines were also slightly off, so the main thing i can recommend you is: take your time eith constructing, and is you draw soemthing some sort of way out of habit but you cannot reason it, study it so you do know next time! :) good luck! you have a great insight going already