cool drawing! the interaction is very cute. for my feedback i reduced the camera angle a bit to make it easier to work on. But it seems like you have inconsistent perspective on your drawing, namely the head/arm with the bird versus the torso and lower body. it is important to get the perspective consistent enough to feel believable, right now it kind of warps the pose making it harder to read. This is super hard and i struggle with it too 🫠i drew how i would approach this pose in perspective on the top right corner of my feedback but of course you can play around with other options as well. also i drew the bird more bent towards her. for the character, pay close attention when drawing pupils that they are oriented the same way in space. good luck on the drawing!
