Hey there! So cool so far! Really like your design :D 1. The leg was slightly off since it didn't follow the same perspective. It was a minor mistake, but notice that a small change makes a difference. Keep the heels lined up on the ground. 2. The pose here is too tricky... There's no support, and the legs are pushing the body forward. I'd pick a different pose, like the ninja one; it is more stable and it conveys the same thing that you tried to show here. I attached another example of a similar pose you can mimic in your character. But when drawing a pose, think about the stability of it (try to mimic the poses and see if that's something you can even do :p). 3. The arms were a bit off, indeed. The forearm was too long. 4. The design looks great! But I'd suggest having a better separation between the materials and different values (notice that in your picture the values look are too similar). Extra elements like belts, clothes, patterns, help to separate elements. The cape... Maybe do it completely like the galaxy thing you suggest on the inner part. That would be cool I think :D Hope this helps!
