Hey there! Nice illustration so far! :D Sorry for the bad overpainting, but I focused on helping you correct the values. Generally speaking, focus on painting clear shapes; that's the key when painting. Notice the difference between your attempt and my correction. The silhouette of the titan is clearer and more readable. Avoid using fog in the whole painting, this make this confusing, instead, use it just in some areas to help to stand out some silhouettes, but the rest should work only with the values. I shaded the front of the titan since the light is coming from behind, this way I had more chance to stand out the body with the rim light. I also adjusted the sizes of the characters and values. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback