Hey! Nice job here so far! Generally speaking, try to push a bit more the shadow areas, especially the zones where the light does not affect the objects (ambient occlusion, terminator, etc). Also, do some master studies from artist you like to have a better understanding of how they shade things, since there are different techniques or ways to hatch. One of my favourite artists is Hue Teo, the way he uses ink when shading drawing is incredibly good! Antonio is another artist I like a lot :D So, do your master's studies and then apply that to your drawings :D Keep it up! | Artwod Feedback