Hey! So cool character design! :D I don't have too much to say about it. But I'd suggest thinking about a bit of storytelling. Since this is a fighter, it would be cool add some anecdotes to "strengthen" that. I mean, it would help if you add some bruises or some sort of scars in the close-ups of the head. This would help to let people know this guy is a fighter, not only with the gloves. I'd add line to the small call-outs, like the crossbow and explain a bit what's inside the magazine (laser arrows?). Besides that, I don't have too much to add. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback