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Great work, fellow Struggler. Forgive the sloppy execution of my paint over, but I think what could really set it off is by adding in some heavy dark layered over it so that the light of the Eclipse becomes more prominent, and cast Guts in more shade, with some rim lights .
This is actually rendered so well! I think you're better at hatching than I am, but thought that some additional shading on the face would look more dramatic and I also thickened your line weight in some places. It's a great piece and there's not much else to say!
Improve your skills, a 3 min read
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
Rendering
June 30 Challenge - Day 1
Practicing Trek characters and attempting illustrating a scene from a book.
Daily sketch page, day 2
Trying to incorporate stuff I learned from portrait road. Drew my OC this time. Struggling with keeping face looking the same in all angles (and fail :x)
David
One thing I constantly struggle with is rendering it always feels as if I’m missing a step or theirs a gap between my knowledge. Feel free to critique my lighting, shading, and etc.
Day 2 Jacqueline's Sketchbook
A Knysna Turaco bird in Art Nouveau style
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.