Hey there! Well done! It's an interesting scene! I like the dynamics inside of it! So, The perspective and proportions of both characters are off, particularly the smaller samurai. The body feels unbalanced, and the angle is incorrect. Remember that you can draw a box to solve the perspective of your characters, so you can ensure they are sharing the same perspective as the scene. Due to the camera angle, many parts of the body will overlap. Because of this, we won’t see both legs the same way, or both arms of the bigger character equally. I recommend drawing a base with a pencil first, so you can later draw on top of it. Also, if a pose is difficult to draw, try recording yourself imitating the pose. This helps a lot, as it allows you to see the body’s movement and, most importantly, the perspective. Start by drawing gestures on a separate page so you can get a better idea of the poses of both characters, and then incorporate them into the same scene. Regarding the composition, I only made slight adjustments. I moved the large character a bit more to the left, while placing the smaller character more to the right, and separated them to create a small moment of tension. I also removed space on the right side because it was dead space, giving more opportunity for the characters to stand out. In your foreground, you could add a diagonal line, as if it were a piece of furniture seen from above. Hope this helps!
