so first of all i really like the character, especially the jurrassic park shirt haha, and i really like the texture of the shark, however i think the rough texture you used is working against your idea of an inflatable plastic shark. the same counts for the bend of the shark, inflatable things tend to be more streight since they are filled with air. because of that, the shark wont have sharp edges probably, so your sharp edges work against the inflation effect as well.https://youtu.be/84N7J4smVnE?si=E_8G9EFIADZc1gUD i tried to show that with the new shark. dont care about the short pants i added i was just playing around with the beach girl idea. however i would maybe mess up her hair a bit and make her skin more beachy, more redish and brown tons. speaking about the face, your face looks quite flat, compared to the rest of your drawing, maybe try working on that as well. i hope i could help you a little with my feedback, try to get some feedback for the face and skin from someone professional, i tried my best to point out what i noticed. Keep it up, i am looking foreward to see the updated version in th future. Greetings Horus
