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My only thought really is the mouth looks a little crooked due to the angle we're looking at the face. I don't know if mine is much better but I think we would see more of the inner roof of the mouth. Also, I find thinking of the lips and the facial hair as two separate forms easier to keep alignment accurate otherwise it can sometimes look like they have an over/underbite.
Improve your skills, a 3 min read
Build expressive portraits using the Loomis head method, Reilly rhythms, and shadow mapping to establish structure, flow, and clear lighting before adding final details.
Portraits
Artemis study
A couple of sketch studies of Artemis from the game Hades and Hades 2. Trying to get a feel of the rhythm of her design especially her hair. The bottom right is from imagination, trying to visualize what kind of bed hair she would have. I think I have overworked the imagination hair, as I was too busy searching for the right rhythms, and not sure if I have the likeness down. Any advice would be great!
June Sketchbook Challenge Day 2
Here's day two of my sketchbook challenge. I definitely wasn't as in much of a mood to draw as yesterday, but I'm happy with what came out! I have a lot of fun sketching quick vehicles, but I have no deep knowledge or understanding of how vehicles work so I make it all up right now. I think I twisted the characters body strangely while trying to point the pelvis in a different direction from the torso. I struggle with the perspective of the hip as a simple shape when drawing in different angles. One of my bigger weaknesses is my line quality. I'm working on breaking my habit of placing lines too fast before considering what the line will look like.
6/2/26
Day 2
checkmate im aussie
This isn't for the june challenge or anything, but i drew these two chess-inspired characters. Since they're based around the knight piece, i wanted there to be a visual motif of three. Three individual shapes found in the nose steam, three splits in the knight's hair thingy, three segments in the handle, you get the point. I just feel like i could've done much more with this concept, or like it's too subtle. Any suggestions? Please let me know!
06-02-26
Hi everyone, I am participating in the June 30 challenge to help me build a habit, become more comfortable with sharing my work, and receive feedback! I've never really taken myself seriously as an artist, and I've always doubted myself, and that is why I am here.
6/2/2026
trying to draw with pen only so i can't erase or use guide lines i realize that many of the side profile siluets are to long
Sketch 01 - The Dragons
Hey! I had a lot of fun making this sketch and I'm looking forward to putting in another entry soon! My biggest challenges were controlling the line weight with the brush pen and smudging the ink likely due to my current brush pen. This is my first upload to the site and would love some feedback! Thank you!
June 30 Challenge - Day 1
Practicing Trek characters and attempting illustrating a scene from a book.
Daily sketch page, day 2
Trying to incorporate stuff I learned from portrait road. Drew my OC this time. Struggling with keeping face looking the same in all angles (and fail :x)