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Hiya. I hope this helps. I left some notes directly on it. I will say, this exercise reminds me of the torso a bit. Perhaps thinking about it like a human torso might help with visualizing the twists and turns... I am also not saying add the purple arrows those are just so you understand the movement of the lines. I also think you are quite literally boxing yourself in, too many of your lines are straight lines when to convey movement and "twists" you need to use curved lines and it seems like you are quite hesitant to add smooth swooshing lines. I suggest you use your shoulders when making those swooshing gestured lines for the curves and try to keep fast and loose. hope this helps! Happy Drawing! <3
Feb 11, 7:27 AM
