Great job with the design so far.

Main points: Pay attention to the insertion points of your anatomy. Don’t just use lines for the sake of lines, make them follow the form.

When designing a character try to keep some contrast in the design so that the viewer’s eye instantly goes towards the pants of interest. In this case I added more contrast to the cap, hair and head so that we are looking here first.

Also, cast shadows go a long way to indicate form and readability! Keep it up :) | Artwod Feedback