Hi! I think you’re mostly there. All your features are perpendicular to one another, so that’s already a great start! It’s just a couple of things to look out for: 1) The mouth protrudes out and wraps around the face. So there’s a lot of subtle plane changes in the area. So what to look out for is where the corners of the mouth is curving into. You have a slight 3/4 view here, the further side of the mouth would be slightly foreshortened. A good way to imagine the placement is to draw out two rubber tubes along a vertical cylinder. 2) This isn’t in your request, but the nose looks a bit long, which also skews the impression of the mouth placement. Hope this helps! Mouth placements are tricky, and everyone struggles with it. I suggest going through that section of the Portrait Road if you have membership. Hope this helps! Cheers, Andrea(Silk on Discord)
