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“maybe block the main shape into simple boxes first, then add the sharp edges back in so the depth reads before the detail takes over”

“maybe the darkness isnt the issue, its that the brow is one solid bar. try a thin tapered shape, thicker near the nose and thinning out past the eye, kept a bit shorter. then even light ink still read”

“maybe the calves arent the main thing, the knees sit a bit high so the shins read long. what helped me is marking knee halfway between hip and floor first, then calf bump on the outside higher than th”

“idk if thin is the whole issue, the neck kinda disappears into the collar so you never see the form. maybe leave a short soft cylinder under the jaw and wrap the robe around it so the head sits on the”

“the face reads soft mostly because the light is so even. maybe drop one darker shadow under the brow and along one side of the jaw so the eyes sit deeper, colors and outfit already feel like him”

“the loose shapes already fit a cat spirit. maybe a harder cut just on the ears and the raised claws so she pops off the red wall”

“idk if you need more crab. one tiny claw on a candy wrap plus the scars already sells the story without crowding the candy colors”

“Something off might just be how stiff it feels. Could a small tilt in the pose fix that without changing the rest?”