I think the background it rendered fine as the focus is meant to be the character, so it’s better to have a slightly out of focus background if that’s what you’re going for. I think you’ve been staring at it too long! The perspective is great. The only thing I changed is the lighting as the background actually matches the character too much in terms of value, and she blends in a bit. By darkening the background it helps her glowy stuff to actually glow and the lighting can stand out. The background also becomes less of a focal point. I also adjusted the light curves so the lighting you did can shine a little more. It’s a very dramatic piece so having more contrast in the lighting can help emphasise that. Hopefully this helped, your drawing is awesome so don’t overthink it too much!

