Hey! Great job! I love how it looks! Just one thing to keep in mind is the position of the foot. The foot should generally follow the direction of the knee; it's not something that can freely rotate 360°. Although some people may have more flexibility than others, in a pose like this, the foot is providing stability and support, so it should follow roughly the same direction as the knee. :) Hope this helps!
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I can't seem to get the lighting right; I feel like something is missing to make my drawing "shine" and really bring it out.
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Hey! Nice! Love the saturation really strong sense of colour. I think you're a little unsure of your forms? so you've got a nice shadow on the ground, that will give you the direction of the light source - then add your AO, and start to 'wrap' your forms. I think going back and seeing the underlying forms (cylinders, boxes, cones) and throwing in your shadows will make a big difference. I feel like your colours are awesome nice and strong they just need some contrast re- shadow. Also a neat trick is to lower the brightness of the background, it will make your lights brighter and give you better contrast to make it 'pop'. I also changed the foot, I know you didnt ask about anatomy but I did. Great work. Keep it coming.
Thanks for your advice. I was a bit stuck when learning about lighting, but now I can see what’s wrong and how to improve it. And thanks for the little correction on the anatomy – I hadn’t noticed the mistake. Thanks again for your feedback.