@fosco

“Hey there! First of all, the value range isn’t quite working yet. You have some dark areas on the mountain that are almost as dark as some areas of the lake, which reduces the sense of depth. On th”

“Forgot to upload the paintover lol”

“Hey there! Nice illustration! You could direct the focal point more toward the character by keeping most of the lighting concentrated in that area. It’s common to want to illuminate the entire ”

“Hey! Cool sketches! In the upper portrait, the right eye is misaligned compared to the left one. The nose also lacks a bit of volume, so ideally, you could shade the underside to suggest its ro”

“Hello there! Indeed, there are a lot of lines, but the main issue is that there isn’t a clear focal point and, overall, everything looks a bit flat because there’s no clear line hierarchy. I did”

“Hello there! You could sketch the shape of the eyebrows and emphasize the lower line a little more, while on the upper line you could draw a few individual eyebrow hairs to give it some sort of tex”

“Hello there! Well, first of all, I’d recommend studying the basic structure of the head, as well as the fundamentals of the eyes, nose, mouth, etc. Study how these features look in real life so tha”

“Hey there! Such a cool illustration so far! Keep in mind that leather has strong and clear specular highlights, with some smooth transitions along the folds. You could also use a slightly text”

“Hey there! Such a cool painting! My suggestion would be to emphasize the form and volume of the body a little more. Even if the goal isn’t to paint with a wider value range and you want to keep”

“Hey there! Colors are on point! What I could suggest is working a little more on the values. The BG could be lighter to create a stronger sense of atmospheric perspective, while the elements in the”

“Hey there! Nice color study! The only thing I'd suggest is to paint the reflections with hard edges and make them slightly darker. This way your painting looks more similar to the reference :) ”

“Hello there! Nice portrait! I’m not sure what the person in the original reference looks like, but I adjusted the proportions a little by following the rule of dividing the face into thirds: fr”

“Forgot to attach the overdrawing on the written feedback :p”

“Hey! Nice character! The main issue I see is that the proportions are a little off, particularly in the torso. The belly button is too close to the chest, which makes the torso look too short. ”

“Hey there! The pose looks good overall! Although I think you could push the gesture a little further. :) I like the torso, but the legs could be spread a little farther apart. The right leg cou”

“Hey there! The character’s left arm is a little too short; you need to make it slightly longer. :) The reason why the hand doesn’t look completely connected to the arm is because of the way the ”

“Hello there! Good job with the characters! However, their perspective feels a little odd, particularly the female character. On one hand, it looks like the angle is supposed to be from a slightl”

“Hello there! You need to adjust the values a bit. :) If the light is coming from behind, try to keep the character within a darker value range so that the dark-against-light contrast is more eviden”

“Hello there! The buildings are off. The lines aren’t converging properly toward the upper vanishing point or the lateral vanishing points, which makes the perspective of the scene feel off. I don’”

“Hey there! The main issue here is the perspective of the chair. On one hand, you’re showing the top of the seat, which doesn’t match the perspective of the armrests at all. Ideally, you should est”

“Hey there! I like the character! :) However, the perspective feels a little off, as does the structure of the character and/or the forms of the armor. My recommendation would be to establish a s”

“Hey there! If what you want is to draw a cityscape, you’ll need to make the character smaller. At the current size, I’d say the character feels like the main focus, and there isn’t much room left t”

“Hello there! You didn’t do it too badly! Just a few small corrections. :) Regarding the first pose, the character isn’t lying down enough to create that “L” shape between the rib cage and the pe”

“Hello there! Well, I made this drawing to show the forms of the body using simple shapes. :) Although I have to admit that top-down views can be a bit tricky, lol. But always keep the perspective ”