Hello there! The buildings are off. The lines aren’t converging properly toward the upper vanishing point or the lateral vanishing points, which makes the perspective of the scene feel off. I don’t see much of a problem with the character. Since the character is quite small, it isn’t really necessary to draw the body 100% accurately. Instead, I’d focus more on making sure the perspective of the buildings is correct. I’m not sure if you used references, but I’d recommend finding some and analyzing where the vanishing points are positioned. This will help you achieve a more convincing worm’s-eye view. :) Hope this helps!
Hello, Thanks a lot for your feedback :) I think you are correct! I haven't used any reference and was trying to train more my "intuitive" perspective but seeing your paintover is really helpful to see how far off my "intuition" is :) For this paintover you used only one point of perspective, but what about the other two? Or since the point is rather in the middle I guess they are not as needed? Let me know what you think :)
It happens :p but whenever you don't feel confident drawing something, look for a reference :D I used a 1-point perspective grid to establish the upper VP, that's why you can see a horizon line there, but ignore that vertical line :) keep in mind that the horizon line will be on the lower part, even outside of your canvas; so you can converge the lines towards the VP's over the HL :) hope this helps!