I really love the drawing! You can give dimension to your drawings by using contrast to showcase the forms even with soft lighting. For example the light is brightest on the parts nearest the mirror (hands, arms, hair, chest) because it is reflecting off the mirror so anything further away and less important can be darker to provide some contrast. On top of that you can use some sharper edges to give the shapes some depth. These are mainly nitpicky things though, I think the way you drew her face is really cool and not wrong at all! It matches the rest of your style. Hopefully this was helpful!
Thanks a lot for the feedback! Your help showed me just how overly cautious I am and how afraid I can be to actually implement certain things, especially in contrast. Plus, I’d lost a bit of objectivity from staring at it for too long, haha It really helped, especially considering the somewhat "unusual" lighting for my drawings in general
I’m so glad it was helpful! And I’m so in the same boat with the cautiousness, you just have to have a blind faith that it’ll turn out good haha. Good luck with your art journey :)

