Hello! great attempt in my opinion, one thing that I think is common in all of them is that you're trying to get all the bumps of the body, when you don't even know what those bumps are, instead, right now focus on connecting the body through rhythms, like study gesture, i would really suggest you to look into force figure drawing technique. And after gesture you incorporate form or perspective, and then you study anatomy. You can also do it in order like initial sketches only gesture, then longer ones with form, but I would really recommend you to study gesture only for a few weeks or a month or two, while studying a little bit about form too, then incorporate form in after a month or so. Unfortunately I cannot do a drawover for these particular sketches. Hope you get something through it and improve. | Artwod Feedback