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Verbessere deine Grundlagen, Lesezeit: 3 Minuten
Master halftones by establishing shapes, volumes, and shadows first, then practicing on beans, noses, portraits, and posters to add texture and depth to your artwork.
Rendering


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Hi everyone, I decided to stop at this stage because I feel like I've reached the limit of my current skills, and I don't want to keep polishing the wrong things. There are a few areas I'm struggling with, and I'd really appreciate any feedback. The biggest issue I see is the creature's anatomy. It was mainly inspired by a rhinoceros and a bison, but I feel like the head and the body don't connect naturally. They almost feel like they belong to two different animals, and I can't figure out how to make the anatomy feel more believable. I also tried to design the armor so that it would feel like one cohesive set, but I'm still not happy with it—especially the armor on the creature's head. It doesn't feel convincing to me, and I'm not sure what direction would improve it. Another goal was to push the design toward a more realistic creature rather than a stylized one. However, I feel like it still ended up looking stylized. On top of that, the creature feels much more stylized than the orc rider, so they don't seem to belong to the same world. If you notice any other issues, I'd really appreciate hearing about them as well.

June Sketch Day 25
Blocky planes. Still struggle to draw wings from bottom angle. I already comfortable with top side angles. But bottom, it feels like the wings don't align with VP that i point it to. When attached with main block frame, it kinda being pulled upside (dont know how to explain it).

I'll remember it!
I have a few firsts here (coloring, hair, and hand) but my focus right now is facial expressions and facial proportions. I think maybe the jaw is off or possibly the whole head is too tall. Any pointers would be appreciated.

Painting disaster
The subject is simple, a white rose on a hand. But I think I am stuck. Something is off. Values and edges, I guess. Form is not very clear. Any help is appreciated!

orge drawing
i got my little sketch of an orge here, i just wonder if i did it well, is there anything i should adjust or fix in my sketch. I would be appreciated for your help

eating outside
i am not sure of the placement of shadows/values. i want the get the light coming out from the background and make the characters have shadows (i hope that makes sense).

Day 25
Today, I'm working on composition.

Day 12
another day down

Gojo fanartin my style
something just feels really off to me in this artwork idk if did something wrong but yeah, i would appreciate a feedbcak on this