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Elven Knight

Künstlernotiz:

Finished Rendered illustration.Any feedback welcome especially on how i can improve the overall illustration. what needs enhancing, is the colouring ok.Is there enough detail?

Kommentare 2

@cutterfly95437709vor 2 Monaten

You 've done so well with armor rendering I think you should use more hard edges when it comes to face shading especally because the light source is so close. (I recommend lasso +Airbrush combo) In terms of values and colors i think you should choose one key light either moon or campfire and secondary L should be dimmer Other than that try keeping high contrast on the face as first focal point ,deeper shadows etc Hope this helps you out

@wayne09112vor 2 Monaten

thank you for your feedback and suggestions Cutterfly,i`ll certainly take your advice onboard, it`s great to know what people think of my art and ways to help me improve.

@elizabeth30600674vor 3 Monaten

first-off, you have an amazing start! the only thing I would say is figure out exactly where the lighting is. hopefully its clear in my edits, but I'm assuming the moon is either a backlight (which is what I went with for the rough paint over) or an overhead lighting, so I just went in with a white to kind just emphasize where the moonlight is and darkened areas that were too bright (the face, left hand, etc.) I would also say it kinda gets a little muddy around the face especially, so I would definitely go back and add some harsh shadows to contrast with the smooth rendering you have (and with that I'd also go back in with darker shadows on the face) Hopefully this makes sense, and the edits are clear (I couldn't really figure out how to make it look nice lol) Beautiful drawing!