Hey! Nice character! The main issue I see is that the proportions are a little off, particularly in the torso. The belly button is too close to the chest, which makes the torso look too short. It should be positioned lower; remember that the belly button is located around the third head. :) Adjusting the proportions this way makes the pose look better. :) I also adjusted the length of the character’s left arm a little, since it was slightly too short. Hope this helps!

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Gerry Flannel · 2026-09-16T07:27:50.791Z

The arms and waist are throwing me off. Any help?

@foscovor 2 Tagen

Forgot to attach the overdrawing on the written feedback :p

@foscovor 2 Tagen

Hey! Nice character! The main issue I see is that the proportions are a little off, particularly in the torso. The belly button is too close to the chest, which makes the torso look too short. It should be positioned lower; remember that the belly button is located around the third head. :) Adjusting the proportions this way makes the pose look better. :) I also adjusted the length of the character’s left arm a little, since it was slightly too short. Hope this helps!

@luca53023vor 2 Wochen

idk if more detail will fix the waist. maybe draw a soft center line from the chest into the pelvis first, then wrap the belt around that tilt so the arms and waist feel like they share the same turn

@lena69184vor 1 Woche

maybe keep that center line super simple first, then wrap the belt and waist around the same tilt so the arms feel like they share the turn

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