Hey there! The pose looks good overall! Although I think you could push the gesture a little further. :) I like the torso, but the legs could be spread a little farther apart. The right leg could face the viewer a bit more, while the left leg could point slightly more outward. I think this would give the character a stronger sense of floating. You could also adjust the position of the left arm a little by raising it slightly. :) Try exploring with rougher gesture drawings before building a more solid mannequin. Exploring gestures this way can help you find more dynamic poses. After that, it becomes easier to clean up the drawing and create a better-proportioned pose while keeping the pose's movement as a foundation. Hope this helps!
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quick anime girl pose drawing, why does it look so awkward
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Trying to sketch an anime girl in a more dynamic pose but it keeps looking weird. the legs feel disconnected from the torso and the whole thing is unbalanced. I think my gesture drawing and construction need work. I’m using digital art, any feedback before i try the redraw?
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idk if more detail will fix the awkward feel. maybe draw one soft curve from the head through the hips first, then hang both legs off hip balls so they share the same tilt. that usually plugs the torso and legs together before any lineart