@batz

“I used your drawing to sketch up this pose. I made the male a little more masculine. I think i mightve confused your request and did a feminine body instead so, im sorry! I did fix the proportion thou”

“I think that the face and neck were just way too long which is why it looked so strange everywhere. Its shortened the head, face and neck then added a little bit of shading so it was more visible.”

“One thing i forgot to do was add depth / form on the corners of the drawing to make it more interesting. But overall i editted the anatomy and poses, please dont be afraid of hands! And make sure the ”

“So the legs you had drawn were better for a body that faced the right. So i moved the legs in the position of the rest of the body. The right (their right) is facing straight while the left leg is out”

“So i used the nose to help with the perspective, the lips and mustache looked like they were positioned forward while the nose and eyes were turned slightly. I adjust the lips and mustaches as well as”

“The sheet says he is made of Porcelain but even that drawing doesnt have a pure white body. Try using a shade of blue and use white for the light from above then make the lower body much darker so tha”

“I decided to draw this in my style since mine and yours are so different. But i drew this character as a teen/child. Your colors were very pale and grayish so keep in mind to use warmer colors around ”

“This is good but try to use darker colors for the eyes amd teeth as well as using values to your advantage to show depth. Shade around face as well and exaggerating the wrinkles and eyebrows. I also ”